Chapter 4 – A Sort of Reconcilliation

“Stupid Shan Ying Lang, I hope you trip and eat dog poop.” Yu Zhu muttered to herself as she angry stripped off the leaves of a willow branch. She sat alone on a tiny dock in the little lake of the Sighing Moon surrounded by gentle green hills. Lovers walked here arm in arm as they enjoyed the quiet choir of crickets serenading in their grassy enclaves.

Never had she been so embarrassed in her life. She couldn’t go back and face Hong Gege now that she’s kicked his best friend in the shins.

“Everyone’s looking for you.” A male voice called out behind her. Yu Zhu whipped around and saw Shan Ying Lang approaching her cautiously. He stood on the green grassy hill. Wind tugged at his robes and carelessly tied hair. He shook his head to clear his bangs from his eyes.

“How did you find me? Yu Zhu asked gruffly.

“I followed your scent.” Was the calm reply.

Yu Zhu stared at him incredulously, “Are you a dog?”

He grinned, his handsome face lighting up like a candle in the night. “Wolf, actually.” Yu Zhu raised an eyebrow but did not ask any more questions.

A few moments of awkward silence passed.

Ying Lang called out, “Have I offended you in some way? Why did you kick me?”

Yu Zhu rolled her eyes in disbelief; she called out “You don’t know who I am?”

“No, should I?” Was the casual reply.

“I’m the —“ Yu Zhu bit her lip, there still were people around the river banks, she didn’t want everyone in the city to know that she was the princess of the kingdom, disguised as a boy to see the festival. “I’m just someone who really doesn’t like you.” She finished and glared at him.

He shrugged; there was no trace of resentment on his face. “That’s okay, not a lot of people do. They say I don’t have manners”

“That’s putting it mildly.” Yu Zhu muttered under her breathe. After a few more moments, he came over and sat down next to her.

Yu Zhu considered shoving him into the pond. When he saw her eyeing him speculatively, he scooted away from her.

“I’m still learning about how to talk with people.” He admitted in the quiet night air. “But when I saw how fast Brother Hong went after you, I knew I made a mistake.”

“Why don’t you know how to talk to people?” Yu Zhu asked curiously.

“When I was little, my mother left my father and me. I didn’t like my father so I decided to live on my own in the woods. When I turned fourteen, I joined the army. I’m sixteen now, like Hong Yan Su.” He was so matter of fact about his lonely life that Yu Zhu felt a twinge of pity for him.

Ying Lang continued, “But I’ve never been to court so I don’t understand why people lie more than they speak the truth. When I asked Brother Hong why, he told me that was what manners are.”

Ying Lang shrugged as he tugged at the grass on the river bank, “I still don’t get it.” He turned to Yu Zhu and took her hand, “Little Brother, I saw tonight that Hong Yan Su cares about you. I only have two people in this world I actually like, Hong Yan Su and Xu Long Hui. In these last few days, I’ve pissed off both of them. So go back already, I don’t want him to be mad when we go back to the battlefields.”

Yu Zhu felt his large, calloused ones wrap around her hands. Yu Zhu was stunned at the warmth and gentleness she felt spread from his to hers. This was the first time any man had touch her. She blushed and looked down. Ying Lang didn’t seem to notice as he grinned his careless grin “Little brother, if you go back with me, I’ll promise I’ll teach you how to shoot a bow the next time I come back!”

Yu Zhu wanted to tell him that she already knew how to shoot but forgot what she wanted to saw when he looked into his bright eyes. Wind gently blew his long bangs into his angular face. His eyes were open and honest, it seemed that he could promise her the whole world with one glance.

“Young Master! Thank god your safe!” Hua Er flew down the stone steps to her mistress, she stopped when she saw Ying Lang holding onto Yu Zhu’s hand. “Let. Go. Of that hand now.” Hua Er drew a dagger and threw it at Ying Lang. Ying Lang laughed and caught the fast dagger with one hand.

Ying Lang smirked, “You act as if she’s a girl and I’m taking advantage of her.” Hua Er drew out another dagger, “My young master is not someone you could touch so casually” Hua Er snarled and advanced. Ying Lang eyes lite up as if he sensed a challenge, and gripped Yu Zhu’s hand tighter, “Make me.”

Yu Zhu’s eyes flashed angrily at Ying Lang’s tone, “You stupid boy. I’m not some prize you can hang onto!” And kicked the surprised Ying Lang a second time in the shins. He jumped backwards to avoid her kick and forgot that he was standing on the edge of the river. With a splash, he tumbled unceremoniously into the freezing cold water.

Yu Zhu had expected to fall in as well, since Ying Lang was holding onto her so tightly and she closed her eyes waiting to hit the icy pool.

But no such fall came. She opened her eyes and looked up into Hong Yan Su’s face. He smiled as he gripped her tightly in his arms, “Young Master, it is more than three hours past the time I promised your father you would return home. I have sent a message to him that you will be late, but we should get you home” Hong Yan Su gently let go of her sleeves as Hua Er ran to join them on the bank.

Hong Yan Su looked into the river, where Ying Lang was trudging out of, murder on his face. Hong Yan Su hid a smile as he called to his sopping friend “Stop looking a half drowned puppy. It’s time we went back as well.”

Advertisements

Tagged: , , , , ,

6 thoughts on “Chapter 4 – A Sort of Reconcilliation

  1. Yen February 5, 2014 at 4:41 pm Reply

    I believe that I am now hooked to your novel! Love it so far, and I really like how you picked a cast too. I helps me visualize the story better. Waiting for your next chapter!!!!

    • dramatictealeaves February 5, 2014 at 10:11 pm Reply

      Aww thank you! I’m working on a couple chapters right now!

  2. Jaime the Drama Noona February 5, 2014 at 6:01 pm Reply

    Omo I giggled so much at the scene at the end there. Ok, yeah I think your choice to switch to third person was a very good one. I am actually liking it much better. It enables the reader to get a better feel for all the characters and not just the heroine.

    You are doing a very good job creating two very distinct men in Hong GeGe and Ying Lang. A noble and a wild boy. Two excellent heroes but very different persons, both having the ability to woo a twelve year old’s heart.

    • dramatictealeaves February 5, 2014 at 7:55 pm Reply

      Yep! At this point Yu Zhu’s still in her still 12 year old self stage, she’s barely registering attraction, but she’s got great candidates!

      • Jaime the Drama Noona February 7, 2014 at 12:04 am

        I like that you started the story at 12, that is such a turning point in a young woman’s life. So many life lessons are learned during these early years and she’s on the verge of being a woman yet still riding the cusp of being a carefree child.

  3. 江りぃす November 18, 2014 at 12:46 am Reply

    0h gosh! U r just so good at making up stories like dis ( though I haven’t read other works from yours if you did have another ones)! I really really like your style of writing too, very easy and pleasant to read★ BTW, are you gonna show a pic of Ying Lang? I do want 2 see him, I mean if you would be so kind teehee(*^◯^*) (though I still like de other hot guy Yan Su)

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s

Drama for Real

Only Raw Drama Reviews

azurro4cielo

Everything that Flash in My Mind ^.^

.............Someone's Corner........... 某人的角

I'll ramble on because I want to....

clover's nook

a welcoming place for every fellow c-novel lover ...

Coffee & Cats

This blog will be consisting of my life trials and various things going on for myself. Let's hope that my life is great entertainment for you all!

大漠謠

小說、討論、電視劇

junjuntianxia

c-novel fensi

New York Post

Your source for breaking news, news about New York, sports, business, entertainment, opinion, real estate, culture, fashion, and more.

darkieut's Blog

This WordPress.com site is about my interests and life

dramatictealeaves

Recapping Dramas, Writing, and Adventuring

The A-Philosopher's Chair

Rediscovering the intellectual life through Asian dramas

The Nerd Nebula

The Nucleus of the Universe for all Nerd Hacks!

Retro Video Gaming

Atari, Sega, Nintendo & Famicom reviews, videos, cover art and more!

The Fangirl Verdict

Completely biased reviews and fangirling

dangerous Puppetry's Blog

나 알아서 할게 뭔 상관이야?

Hidari's HoMe

Why so serious?!

xiaowen206's Blog

Fulfilling the drama addiction.

Aigooyobo

Escape Fantasy, Embrace Reality

Order of Dynast

Writer. Fangirl. Book Lover.

33 Grams of Blog

Procrastinating, Kingdom Saving, and all other forms of Geekdom

HallyuSG

Where fans, music, and cultures connect.

Meanwhile, Melody Muses...

Poetry to Heal the Heart

dryedmangoez

Television, The Amazing Race, and More!

Messages to Myself

Internal Guidance

The Community Storyboard

Where creativity meets community

The Neighborhood

society online's social conscious

Abandoned Kansai

All abandoned: Chernobyl / Pripyat, Nara Dreamland, Anti-Zombie Fortress, Japanese Sex Museum - and many, many more! Plus: North Korea Special - 2 trips, 16 days / 14 nights! As seen on CNN...

A Stairway To Fashion

contact: ralucastoica23@gmail.com

Yoo Ah In SikSeekLand

Yoo Ah In's International Fans Base

Sifu Hallyu

Oppa's take on East Asian Cinema, Kdrama, Kpop, Anime, and SciFi

And The Geek Shall (Inherit the Earth)

Reviews, academia, discussion & general geekery for those who shall one day 'Inherit The Earth'

[ku-măn]

You are your own brand; create yourself

Poco Clouds

I love the soft and fluffy clouds in the sky~

han2fin

Travels and friendship

Tịch Lạc Tuyết

"Mẫu đơn hoa hạ tử, tố quỷ dã phong lưu"

ღTử Vi Cácღ

Yêu thương được cho đi là yêu thương có thể giữ được mãi mãi....

My library

Time for smile :) novels, dramas...

%d bloggers like this: